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    dots Submission Name: Until Next Weekdots
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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.47 - 144/114/64
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsUntil Next Weekdots
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    From spoken words that catch a smile
    The timeless hour that passes by
    Given way with tales of life
    For seamless hopes of tomorrow

    Like sand through our fingers
    Another moment slips away

    Maybe just a second
    To gather once again
    For more, never less
    Until next week

    Let the candle burn on brightly
    In ambient musical form

    Before the chances melt away
    Let this moment carry on
    Endure with closing eyes
    Until next week

    Listen to the silence
    Hesitation brings the clouds

    One more vivid moment
    No more pauses to be made
    Boundless is the present
    A soulful whispering wind

    Why wait...
    Until next week?




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