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    dots Submission Name: Sweetheartdots
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    Author: ParanoidParadox
    ASL Info:    22/m/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.31 - 89/92/41
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 388
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsSweetheartdots
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    Sweetheart please just come to bed
    Your eyes are bloodshot and red
    The monsters inside your head
    Are delusions that you've fed

    Please darling unlock this door
    We've been through this before
    A gaze lost miles away from shore
    Gibbering patterns on the floor

    Honey I can hear your screams
    Haunted by demonic dreams
    I wish I knew what it means
    But nothing is as it seems

    Put the knife down sweety pie
    You do not need to take my life
    Take a look into my eyes
    Why does this end in my demise?




    Submitted on 2010-11-24 19:32:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well i didnt think your poem was going to end like that! i really thought it was going to end with the person dying, not you almost getting killed. i really like this, because the name of it makes you think its going to be a sweet poem and its far from it! im going to have to go and read some more of your stuff now :)
    | Posted on 2010-11-29 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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