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    dots Submission Name: Shit Fair (Rap Poem)dots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsShit Fair (Rap Poem)dots
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    They say hey
    You’re gay
    With a man
    Okay
    But their face
    Isn’t the same
    Hidden deep inside
    Is disgrace
    But they hide it well
    Fuck it
    Chill
    This is what I am
    This is me
    Just like you fit in them jeans
    It’s still me
    More free
    Living my dream
    Whatever it may be
    Enough now it’s time
    To bust this rhyme
    And cut it down poetry’s throat
    Watch it float
    Blood in my coke
    Sippin’ till I choke
    I’ll let you live
    You hope
    And if I don’t
    Tell Satan I’ll be there
    Let me clear shit up here
    And make this shit fair

    S.H.




    Submitted on 2010-11-24 21:36:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      'And cut down poetry's thoart' the best line. hands down!!
    | Posted on 2010-11-26 00:00:00 | by Apteryx | [ Reply to This ]


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