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    dots Submission Name: Mutant-Strange-Love dots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 529
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMutant-Strange-Love dots

    So like when the apple pie in my mind
    Is beginning to grow furry green slime
    And I am craving element U-239
    When the reticulated anaconda

    That was comatose in my mutant genes
    Slithers up my spine expecting to dine
    Well where do you think I'll be seen
    I'll be in the basement with a secret love

    I am sure that the Russians are in a tiff
    Wondering where she could ever be
    Probably has them a little bit miffed
    But then she's not much to flaunt herself

    At parties or too make the fashion page
    Oh sure presidents and kings all want her
    And she is still desired as a tabloid rage
    And there is not enough Holy Water

    For anyone to just sit around and sip
    To protect them from the burning nightmare
    Of the thing she is when she's really ripped
    You might say she's a bitch at achieving

    Critical mass In my mewling mutant
    Mind I plotted mayhem for a time
    It would be just the two of us truants
    Sharing the eternal wonder of half-life

    And if my mutant lips had been as good
    At kissing as my purple pecker was
    At pissing gobs of greenish goo could
    It be? I guess I could have found someone

    A bit sweeter but never anyone neater
    It's time to stumble down the stairway
    Someone has already started up there heater
    Wow I just have to rest a minute now

    Mutant eyes glowing with latent cobalt fire
    I just sit enraptured with warped nucleic love
    All encased in metal her half-life I desire
    My hearts are palpitating and I blush

    As I brush her shinny case I rush
    To hide my shame but green bloods
    On the boil I feel like a wanton lush
    As lust overwhelming fills my head

    I stiffen in anticipation as I....
    Apply polish to her burnished skin
    I know what ticks inside her lying
    At her core a radioactive warhead

    And who with all there marbles could ever
    Ask for more Oh my loves encased in metal
    And tritium makes her trip and I never
    Could love another it's her half-life I crave

    She turns me on more than nitro or a
    Fulminating mercury drip, she's the
    Bitch of heavy metal and as I lay
    My loving hands upon her I pray

    That I might be there when she explodes someday
    Yes she is the bitch of heavy metal
    And tritium makes her trip I would pay
    For the pleasure give up a life of leisure

    Just to brush my lips upon her button
    And watch her as she achieves critical
    Mass But do not think I am a glutton
    She has got plenty of fiery love to share

    And once she goes critical well
    who am I to care?


    Submitted on 2010-11-27 19:51:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm drawn into it as it progresses. Kind of a party of wackyness, going high tech destructo. You're a fun guy, dude, and I never say dude, that was someone else.
    | Posted on 2010-11-28 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      I never really knew what a mutant was, well I knew but I didn't get it like I do now... How do you know this stuff?
    I still gasp a bit with the sound of goo & ooze... but I suppose thats all apart of it. "The [censored] of Heavy Metal" -- now that is totally cool, lol. But... don't I remember this one too? I want something new, add your goo if you have to... but this is skippin'[censored]in' heavy metal cool fer' sure!
    | Posted on 2010-11-28 00:00:00 | by Just Kel | [ Reply to This ]

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