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    dots Submission Name: Ode to Zombiezdots
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    Author: Di Re Rakord
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 130/125/30
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       I wrote this to all the zombies in call of dutys nazi zombies. It made me laugh so u might like it too.


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    dotsOde to Zombiezdots
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    My dearest zombie,
    Look at your head!
    Its blown clear off!
    your obviously dead!
    why do you still harm me?
    and make me be down'd?!!?
    You have but 5 seconds left!
    to stagger around!
    Now my brother in arms,
    Must battle the dead,
    All alone with his gun!
    And shells tiped with lead.
    But I scream "shit ive been got!"
    And he brings me a needle,
    that helps me alot!
    Now im back off the ground!
    But all my perks have been lost!
    My upgraded weapon,
    will blast lazer beams!
    Right through you head!
    my dear dear zombie.
    Even though you are dead,
    we can still be friends!
    (just dont eat my brains!)




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      this was funny, but i think that anyone who isnt familiar with the game will be a little lost, but besides that its a good write
    | Posted on 2010-12-01 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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