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    dots Submission Name: Tearing It Updots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsTearing It Updots
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    Gripping on your pelvis
    Loving this temptress
    Girl I wanna feel you up

    Temperature is rising
    Girl I'm not surprised at
    How you're tearing me up

    Flipped up, worked out
    Tell me girl, what it's all about
    Tell me softly don't interrupt

    Sit down on my lap
    Tell me girl where it's at
    Tell me if it's thick or fat

    Booty on the dance floor
    Begging mercy for more
    Tell me where do I sign up at

    I'm gripping on your pelvis
    Loving this like elvis
    Girl I wanna eat you up

    Temperature is rising
    Girl don't be surprised at
    How I'm tearing It up

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      woah! i cant tell if this is about dancing on the floor, or between the sheets! i love how you can add that sexual vibe without actually being overly sexual, most poems like this are usually dirty and im glad to say this one isnt.. and i mean come on! i love how you added the bit about elvis :)!
    | Posted on 2010-12-01 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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