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    dots Submission Name: The same sad songdots
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    Author: Di Re Rakord
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 130/125/30
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I wrote this at work. My head got to blury and full. This is what came out.


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    dotsThe same sad songdots
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    All i know is madness,
    insanity wraped in a cloak of sadness.
    Everything i feel is tainted,
    my emotions are bare and unpainted.

    Everything that I am is here before you,
    my mind my body my heart and soul too.
    Its just not enough, its never enough.
    You share nothing taking it all,
    leaving me behind curled into a ball.

    Now wrath and malice dance in my heart,
    breaking and tearing riping me apart.
    Tears will not fall but blood shall spill,
    weather its mine or yours this void i must fill.

    For the end is much to cloudy to see,
    I know you will never belong to me.




    Submitted on 2010-12-02 22:10:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i know how you feel hun, ive been in that place before were your just not sure what is really going on but you know that if you have to feel that pain anymore then your either going to hurt yourself or someone else,, even though i havent felt like that in some time its kind of hard to forget.. goodwrite :)
    | Posted on 2010-12-03 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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