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    dots Submission Name: Define this.dots

    Author: Queen_of_spades
    ASL Info:    21/F/Nocturne
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 95/166/107
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsDefine this.dots

    I am music.

    I am poetry.

    I am art.

    I am breath.

    I am blood.

    I hear the subtleties.

    I touch with my love.

    I sense what you feel.

    I taste freedom.

    I see opportunities.

    I will change this world.

    I have been forgotten.

    I have been remembered.

    I have been mistreated.

    I have broken hearts.

    I have moved mountains.

    I have lived in a vice.

    I have felt true love.

    I have been proud of myself, twice.

    I have become a better person.

    I have learned how to let go.

    I move to the beat of my mind.

    I sing to take flight.

    I paint with my heart.

    I give birth to couture.

    I destroy to create.

    I am working on a masterpiece.

    It is called my soul.

    I am nothing.

    I am everything.

    I am simply Rose.

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      I love this!!!! this makes me want to cry, so much emotion. Incredible! going to my favs
    | Posted on 2010-12-07 00:00:00 | by Di Re Rakord | [ Reply to This ]
      It might sound tired or cliché' but the allure of definitionalism is obvious . Hardly anywhere is this more true than when describing ones self . It can inspire , it can help you be true , it can foreshadow , it can explain , it can accomplish so many things . I feel you have done a good job of working with these truths . You have presented both sides , you have spoken of your desires , you have defined your goals , and thoroughly reminisced . I really liked the simplicity of your conclusion . A write like this can help you understand yourself as well as explain to others . Good job .

    | Posted on 2010-12-03 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. i really liked this, like alot! everything you said clearly made me think of passion and how without it we wouldnt have all of that, this is really good!
    | Posted on 2010-12-03 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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