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    dots Submission Name: a child's prayerdots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Serious
    Total Views: 807
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    Description:
       When I was getting hit across the face, I remember
    one prayer. It used to haunt me at night but I would repeat it in my head until I couldn't feel any pain. Children every day all over this world are getting abused. repost this prayer if yoou want a better future for children.


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    dotsa child's prayerdots
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    The LORD is my shepherd, I lack nothing.
    He makes me lie down in green pastures,
    he leads me beside quiet waters,
    he refreshes my soul.
    He guides me along the right paths
    for his names sake.
    Even though I walk
    through the darkest valley,
    I will fear no evil,
    for you are with me;
    your rod and your staff,
    they comfort me.

    You prepare a table before me
    in the presence of my enemies.
    You anoint my head with oil;
    my cup overflows.
    Surely your goodness and love will follow me
    all the days of my life,
    and I will dwell in the house of the LORD
    forever.




    Submitted on 2010-12-03 16:41:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Pathetic poem. God is with his children all the times. Faith in him will do the wonders.
    | Posted on 2010-12-05 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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