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Author: bigohhh1
ASL Info:    31/M/Fl
Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 25 /21 /37
Words: 147
Class/Type: Prose /Passion
Total Views: 884
Average Vote:    5.0000
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my memory recalls you again
over and over I think of it
how you choked yourself
how you loved when I did that thing that drove you
how we bruised each other
and smiled about it for a week after
How you went crazy when I spit on it
and gave it a lil smack
how it seemed to drive you to prove how much you loved it
and how we just kept going
sweaty and out of breath
our pulses racing
our lust raging I pulled your hair
and you spit in my mouth
and we erupted again
grinding out some crazy song
of lovefucklust
And you busted again but this time with a tear
and we held a gaze
your tits drenched with my sweat
I remember you like this a lot
And miss you even more

Submitted on 2010-12-03 19:23:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Children do browse this site ya know. Just sayin lol.
Very....provacitive. I always do love poems that arent afraid to describe some good ol' sex. And with such spot on accuracy.
| Posted on 2010-12-04 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]

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