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    dots Submission Name: I saw her crydots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       I saw a boy going along with his father smiling....and I saw this girl beside nicely dressed up (with a red cloth which is wore on occasions and not cleaned up face) with a coin box. She looked at that boy and that instance is what the poem is about. (Third person perspective)


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    I saw her there,
    She was standing in front of me with an emotionless face.
    I wondered what it was that I saw in her eyes.

    A child pulling his fathers hand,
    daddy lets go play...
    A child watching another life,
    a life deprived she does not say.

    Not a word from her mouth,
    Not a tear from her eyes.
    I cried instead for that tear to drop.

    I saw her thirst for a life with a smile,
    as she could not even smile as she was this child,
    with a heart and a soul with no purpose to die,
    with a life, with a bowl of no food to suffice.

    I see her in front of my eyes,
    Life is cruel and that is what I have to say.
    Lies are those fairy tales which faint the truth,
    The truth of a war in life we wage...

    Life - is always in tears.
    A smile is always in thy dreams.

    So I smile and walk away...




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