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    dots Submission Name: For Youdots
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    Author: Zabriel
    ASL Info:    22/MI
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 122/120/63
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
    Total Views: 527
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 964



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       Mostly just journal free-verse here. Felt like sharing. Hope you enjoy :)


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    dotsFor Youdots
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    When you run away
    I’ll be close behind
    When life is too much
    Let me share your burden
    I need you in my life
    And I need you to need me in yours
    I don’t mind carrying you
    If it means that I can hold you in my arms
    I’ll hold your hand if you’re scared
    If you promise never to let go
    I’ll listen to your teary confessions
    Your anxieties and fears
    If it means that you put your trust in me
    Enough to run to me when life gets hard
    I’ll let you stand on your own two feet
    But I’ll always stand close behind
    To catch you when you fall
    My hand is yours
    To lift you when you need help up
    To comfort you when the night is too long
    To lift your chin when you don’t have the strength
    To face life on your own
    Everything I do, I do for you
    Because you’re my friend
    And I’ll always love you.




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