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Comfortable Insecure

Author: Zabriel
ASL Info:    22/MI
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Words: 104
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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This is all about the contradiction between feeling and action as well as the general confusion that being in love can bring. I hope you enjoy it.

Comfortable Insecure

When I see you pass by
No bells toll to signal your presence
No angels sing of your beauty
No fire lights the night sky
Time is as fleeting as the moment before
But something changes, in me
I feel more brave, yet more timid
I desire closeness, but keep distance
I dream, and dash dreams against the rocks
I say everything, and yet nothing at all
Because what does one say to a girl
That hasn't been said before?
How does one confess himself,
When all the words belong to another?
How does one begin to explore
A mystery that feels like home?

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