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    dots Submission Name: My Frienddots
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    Author: einna
    ASL Info:    23/F
    Elite Ratio:    5.44 - 11/13/14
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 919
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 802



    Description:
       12-4-10
    To a friend...


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    dotsMy Frienddots
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    Hard times lie ahead my friend;
    Hard times, there will be many.
    But rest assured, I have your hand, my friend;
    I will guide you through these dark cities.

    I'm shielding your heart with my hands, my dear;
    I will protect you with my courage.
    Have confidence in my strength, my dear;
    I will make sure you find your happiness.

    Don't give in to the pain, my sweet;
    I won't let it over take you.
    Don't apologize for your tears, my sweet;
    I will be there to wipe them from your cheek.

    I will keep you in my arms, my love;
    I will hold you as long as you'll stay.
    Just know I keep your heart, my love;
    And I'll protect it as long as you'll let me.




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