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    dots Submission Name: The Wanderer dots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsThe Wanderer dots

    and then being left to wander
    our hero walks alone.
    He has crossed the bridge of the betrayed
    passing thru the misty hiss of sarcastic spray
    and the torrent of the unchanging grays.
    As to all the tears shed along the way,
    he really has not much to say.

    Upon a tale unending,
    a quest unfulfilled
    to become a trusty janitor
    and clean the streets of Nome.

    Ahead the Thunder Mountains
    are devoured by the storm.
    Behind he vanquishes memories
    of gaiety and charm
    to languish with his lovers pleas
    in the frigid arms of the melancholy sea.

    For the world and all it wonders
    beckon to his soul
    and thus he knows his destiny
    is to forever roam
    until he finds the fabled city
    and shines the golden streets of Nome.

    Then being left to wander
    his mood begins to change
    his steps become more lively
    for at last he is released.

    Moreover, in his heart, he knows he must hurry
    before the bodies are discovered
    by the police.

    Submitted on 2010-12-04 21:55:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I generally don't go for peoples wanderlust because it's not selfless enough . Clairaudience clairvoyance is of pandemic's phatic , I've often wished I could com up with the gun that would kill would be murders in the act etc. etc. etc. , but what was I to do with the bodies ? You're probably right I'd better hurry here they come . What's a lowly janitor to do ?
    | Posted on 2010-12-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      Thus begins our story of The Janitor of Doom!
    | Posted on 2010-12-04 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

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