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    dots Submission Name: Besidedots
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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.49 - 145/114/65
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Of all the time that passes by
    None of it seems quite relative

    The shifting sands of the hourglass
    The beginning of the end

    From the truth of circumstances
    Hope can get washed away

    In an instant of meditation
    A moment can seem like forever

    The present is today
    The future a distant illusion

    Questions of life
    Answers diluted in the clouds

    Lifted souls catch fallen dreams
    They carry the hope thought lost

    Kindred to this ageless sleep
    The absolution of their fate

    Lost amongst the tossing waves
    A journey of passionate embrace

    The synchronicity of a dream
    It keeps their spirit awake

    Colors faded to shrouds of gray
    Tomorrow's voice beckons escape

    One more moment
    One more day
    Until we walk beside...




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      Hi. Had a look at this poem and will take a closer look and think about it somemore. In your signature design its seems that you like geometry. I am fasinated by sacred geometry myself. regards. Especiasllly by Drunvalo Melchizedek. Joachim
    | Posted on 2010-12-05 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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