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    dots Submission Name: The Last Love Letterdots
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    Author: Dead Bell
    ASL Info:    23/m/Ire
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 48/129/125
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsThe Last Love Letterdots
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    Don’t tear it open
    There are some pictures inside
    What some might find listless
    Unless I prefer to remember you as kind,
    As some preferred mate

    Our love was restless
    And I admit I left as some sort of test
    Now I’m the one worse off
    And you are two storeys up
    Looking at the un-loveable wenches
    Stumbling home

    The one’s you wish to have
    That I wish I was again




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