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    Author: Di Re Rakord
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 130/125/30
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I wrote this to a friend to cheer up her mood


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    dotsYou aredots
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    You are
    You are the most beautifull thing i have ever seen
    you are thoughtfull and thought less
    you house within you sorrow and gladness
    your smile puts the stars to shame
    you are more than any man can hope to gain
    you put others before yourself
    you are allways wanting & willing to help
    you listen even when its bad
    your shoulder is there when im sad
    you cry for people you dont even know
    you ride to let us know its not just a show
    you love and you live
    you are always trying to give
    you are so wonderfull i just wanted you to see
    you are exactally the person you need to be.




    Submitted on 2010-12-07 13:32:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really hope this cheered her up, because this is really sweet and any girl who doesnt feel better after this is just plain dumb.
    | Posted on 2010-12-07 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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