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    dots Submission Name: Monopolydots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsMonopolydots
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    Go directly to jail
    Do not pass go
    Do not collect 200

    The game of the century
    All walks of life
    And what they want to be
    Shuffleboard
    And little led idols

    Go directly to jail
    Do not pass go
    Do not collect 200

    Your little elite
    In Christmas parcels
    With the banking systems
    And properties
    Of your dreams

    Go directly to jail
    Do not pass go
    Do not collect 200

    Round and round
    The little acquisition wheel
    The houses
    The rent
    The hotels

    Go directly to jail
    Do not pass go
    Do not collect 200

    Your intimidation
    Via a board game
    Your indoctrination
    Into the money you spend
    Acceptance
    Is winning in the end

    Go directly to jail
    Do not pass go
    Do not collect 200






    Submitted on 2010-12-07 16:27:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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