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    dots Submission Name: He Will Find Usdots
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    Author: Dolor
    ASL Info:    21/m
    Elite Ratio:    6.06 - 129/158/79
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    Bytes: 100



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    dotsHe Will Find Usdots
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    At arm's length I bind
    emotion: piercing through, light
    heals my troubled heart.




    Submitted on 2010-12-08 15:06:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice haiku. there's never much to say on them really is there? most comments I find on haikus argue over wether a haiku or not, nature themed and syllable count etc. but I enjoyed this
    | Posted on 2010-12-10 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]


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