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    dots Submission Name: Fish Girldots

    Author: in shadow
    ASL Info:    22/F/ nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 581/277/103
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsFish Girldots

    She had a neon halo and phosphorescent wings
    blowing smoke rings in back alleys

    She was Vegas pretty
    A voice like an angel

    She turned moths to butterflies
    made me sick with wanting
    I got hung up on the smell of the ocean
    desperate to see her again

    she changed everything for me

    She became a jukebox junkie,
    who danced on broken glass,
    for men who would never love her

    'till the cops found her clothes on the pier

    no trace of the beautiful girl
    with the sea foam eyes
    and the broken heart

    Submitted on 2010-12-10 08:22:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it sounds like she was your siren , and i grew up near the ocean so ive heard plenty of stories on women like that. i love anything that mentions the ocean because i never get to see anymore
    | Posted on 2010-12-11 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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