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    dots Submission Name: So... now i've got this degreedots

    Author: in shadow
    ASL Info:    22/F/ nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 581/277/103
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       As an english major people always ask what I'm planning to do after I graduate or they assume I'm going to teach. They always chuckle when I tell them I'm going to open a cupcake shop, but I'm dead serious.

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    dotsSo... now i've got this degreedots

    So you're getting into grad school,
    getting pregnant, getting married,
    joining the circus, getting a real job ...

    I'm running off to start a Cupcake Shoppe

         Vanilla Almond Cream, Red Velvet, Black Bottom     
    You'll come by on your lunch breaks
         Black forest, Orange Jasmine, Cookie Monster     
    For breakfast, phoning in orders for office parties
          French Toast, Cappuccino, Cinnamon bon      
    You'll swing by with your dates all dolled up
         Starry night, Chocolate covered Strawberry, First Kiss     
    You'll bring your kids for a special treat
         Princess Pink with sprinkles, Fluffer Nutter, Monkey Business      
    When you miss the taste of summer weekends
         Orange Float, Lemon Drop, Pink Lemonade, Turtle sundae      
    When you feel like the Holidays
         Pumpkin, Peppermint dream, hot chocolate, Bleeding Heart

    Now you've got that masters degree,
    the two kids, a four bedroom house,
    an in with the Ringling Brothers,
    a cubical.. with a view of the next cubical
    and wait.. just there ... you've got frosting on your nose

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      This is awesome, especially the ending:) He'll be stopping in pretty soon with the cheap trick that he is cheating on his wife with lol
    | Posted on 2010-12-13 00:00:00 | by Joybell | [ Reply to This ]
      Only when you have the greatest determination and heart into something will it come out as a poem such as this. And there is nothing better than writing a poem to support yourself and your views.
    Cute poem.. neat job.
    | Posted on 2010-12-11 00:00:00 | by rsujith | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm i love cupcakes, i thnk id rather run away and bake cupcakes all day then have to see clowns. so i think your making the smartest decision. i just hope everything works out for you in the end
    | Posted on 2010-12-11 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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