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    dots Submission Name: Lucifer's Giftdots
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    Author: josymanthegreat
    ASL Info:    21/m/GA from Puerto Rico
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 337/364/104
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Based on Jungian Theory. Hero vs. Trickster


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    dotsLucifer's Giftdots
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    Oh fallen one how are you,
    The lights main adversary,
    The murderer of innocence,
    The archangel trapped on earth.

    Oh how misunderstood you are,
    Disfigured your cause becomes,
    So do slanderous tongues strike,
    Against your brittle skin.

    Don't they see that if not for you,
    Here we would not be,
    We would be trapped inside a garden,
    Just a science fair project.

    You are the Prometheus,
    To the great Zeus we've come to love,
    Punished for the knowledge,
    You have given us.

    We were to be perfect,
    Perfect and immortal,
    Easily manipulated,
    To serve our purpose and be done.

    But you wanted more,
    You wanted us to live,
    To know from right and wrong,
    Weight our choices and decide.

    Oh so how are you now Lucifer,
    I am doing so well,
    Thankful for this gift,
    The God of this Earth.




    Submitted on 2010-12-10 21:38:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      All very thoughtful and I'm sure it's appreciated, but Lucifer and Luke, etc. means "light" ya know. This is extended to include "enlightenment" for many, as you have indicated here, although by any logical mindset the gracious hero of Earth referred to thereby always comes out as lessor to his own creator (which he never claimed to be). The hierarchy is what it is, and all of it has a purpose else it would not be.

    On the other hand, the "Day of the Lord" will by the words of the prophets be one of darkness.
    Joe 2:31 The sun shall be turned into darkness, and the moon into blood, before the great and the terrible day of the LORD come.
    Amo 5:18 Woe unto you that desire the day of the LORD! to what end [is] it for you? the day of the LORD [is] darkness, and not light.
    Act 2:20 The sun shall be turned into darkness, and the moon into blood, before that great and notable day of the Lord come:
    (and so on...) Great stuff indeed!

    By personal convention I capitalize "G" in God only when referring to the Most High, that particular and ultimate Creator in His essence although the small "g" version of god might translate correctly from numerous creations of same as well as being used to refer to any number of pagan entities.

    Is is this stuff for real? Yeah, even not being a betting man, I'd bet on it.
    | Posted on 2010-12-11 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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