Life

Author: jackz ASL Info:    24/F/OH Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591 /623 /381 Words: 96

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Life

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I'm lost within my ways throughout my daily routine I am dazed and confused Hurting I am, by my own neglect to my body starvation sleep deprived settles in ... seems like all at the same time cant sleep for if I do the nightmares will simply keep haunting me eating is the least of my concerns... falling further down on my "To Do List" Loosing this battle quietly I am indefinitely.. This ending is guaranteed nevertheless Ill keep fighting Ill stand tall and strong Till I can no longer hold my own

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You know what I think, line for line, you should write a reflection to this, but on the greener side of the pasture, or rather as someone once told me, turn the side you have into something green. Just an idea, I would really be excited to see what you could come up with, you are a very creative writer and down to earth at the same time, makes it easy to relate to.

| Posted on 2010-12-15 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]

I hope that you know that You are thought of. You are cared for and there are those out there whose lives would be greatly affected if you were no longer here. That being said..... Go eat a cheesburger!! hehe I really hope that you do "keep fighting" and " standing tall" Because I know that you have the strength. If you need me call anytime like I said day or night, Always Heather Keep writing

| Posted on 2010-12-12 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]

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