This is very well constructed, and done with much artistry.
I interpreted this as a treatise against mankind's penchant for violence and war. It presents provacative philosophy as the entire history of mankind is a history of violence. I've never understood why, when the majority of mankind are normal peaceful loving beings, how despots and tyrants still manage to emerge and spark massive wars and slaughter on an industrial scale. But, without tyranny being violently dispelled, we would be doomed to loss of freedom and slavery.
You have done this with much skill, and it provides provocative reading. Nice work Caitlin!
i really like this, the flow was great and i could clearly see someone down on their knees begging for either their life or everyone elses. this is a really good write and now im going to have too look at some more of your work!