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...the lesser evil...


Author: rws
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...the lesser evil...



sometimes love
is achingly beautiful

and

sometimes love
leaves nothing

but the ache...




Submitted on 2010-12-11 21:46:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wonderfully and succinctly expressed. so universal....everyone can relate to this. we have all experienced the ache of love, how it can be so intense an exquisite that it hurts....and then there's the heartache it can leave in its wake.....

great title too....

i love the economy of your thoughts and words....will be back to see more of your work.
| Posted on 2011-05-05 00:00:00 | by rubie | [ Reply to This ]
  So true... so true.
| Posted on 2010-12-15 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
  love is a journey.

it's a way. sometimes painful. sometimes not. but it is a way to something bigger, greater, larger than self. it can be just as devastating as it can be miraculous.

i have had both. good and bad.

don't think i'd trade either experience. nope.

not at the moment at least.
| Posted on 2010-12-12 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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