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    dots Submission Name: I amdots
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    Author: Di Re Rakord
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 130/125/30
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Misc/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 512
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    Bytes: 644



    Description:
       Just felt like writing.


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    dotsI amdots
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    I am an organized mess
    I am an emotional wreck
    I am a bit of everything
    I am alot of nothing
    I am a lover
    I am a fighter
    I am conduit
    I am an amplifier
    I am a friend
    I am alone
    I am a mass amount of hate
    I am infinant
    I am tangable
    I am honest
    I am malice
    I am happiness
    I am sorrow
    I am a drug
    I am a bad habbit
    I am gullable
    I am heartbroken
    I am strong
    I am capable
    I am kind
    I am evil
    I am proud
    I am animate
    I am all I can be
    I am me!




    Submitted on 2010-12-12 15:12:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      looks like it takes alot to define you. ive seen many pieces of work were people try to tell us who they are, and i always enjoy this format alot more then the others. good write
    | Posted on 2010-12-12 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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