as the bullet slices the nerve... -------------------------------------------
is it this again?
as i pretend I feel nothing-
not even a flinch at the bullet
as it slices the nerve....
right when the words
spill out, then the vicodon's served
hurts a lil less now
all but in spite of the verbs
feeling bad on a Thursday
rearrange the words to say
had a chance but i merk'd it in the worst way
just a slant, cuz you know i luv my word play
sayin- sure you can read into the words- hey (*shrugs*)
out of the hurt, dont you know u were the worst---
verse overdosed down like druggie might
bet you aint contemplatin like- really wuz he right?
on and off tangents cant focus on study night
let you outta all the things i sed thats where u'd judge me right?!.....
and say that i dont know you
if i really cant show you
ill just have to show you
This unfolded similar to the turning of the barrel of a snub gun.A bullet itself hitting arteries and puncturing nerves feels like a hot iron being pressed on to you.
The street slang and gives it more appeal to a gunman, judgement of a gun holder in word play fashion.
It releases a view of a druggy cloud that hangs over a thinking gunman with numbness of pain...I think.
From the impact and curiosity of the titled my finger jumped into clicking the mouse to read it.I was only slightly dissatisfied with it's closure only because I was looking to read something more creatively graphic but that's just me.