This reminds me of Life lived and life lost and life dreamt of and life as it is and never actually written down on the Heart Tables - your Temple Scrolls.
I just suggest that you read my "Elite Lacunae" as well as Daniel Barlows (DB) recent comment on it and I think you might follow my mindset on life as well. The other comments on it is not actually what I put forth in it but people read with their minds intent and not always with the Heart of Life. I like your poems it is fresh and not complicated to relate to. keep going Lv jm