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    dots Submission Name: The New Medots
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    Author: Diablo Tapitio
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 85/111/62
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe New Medots
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    This is the new me,
    the old me is dead,
    A twisted new reality,
    A new war inside my head.

    So this is the new me,
    who even scares himself,
    a man who dosnt care,
    about his life or his health.





    Submitted on 2010-12-15 20:38:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hi i liked the first comment and its blunt and right to the point but very true

    are you feeling sory for yourself or just come to the end of your domain

    sandman
    | Posted on 2010-12-16 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      you should always care about yourself, even if the times are hard. ever seen the ugly truth? well theirs a part were gerard butler asks hiegl if shes ever masterbated.. and she said no and he tells her well if you dont wna f*** yourself then who will.. sorry if thats a little awkward but the same rules apply here. if your not gonna care about yourself then your giving other people the liberty to do the same thing. i know that these arent the best of times but you've got to be strong for your self before you can be strong for anyone else.
    | Posted on 2010-12-15 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and sweet. Leaves me wanting more though. I'm conflicted as to whether I'd like to see it longer or not. The last stanza is fairly chilling, though.
    | Posted on 2010-12-15 00:00:00 | by ParanoidParadox | [ Reply to This ]


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