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    dots Submission Name: Snapfrost.dots

    Author: Derrick Thomas
    ASL Info:    24/Male/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 21/59/39
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    ...and we heard a loud snap. Five, maybe six crackles and then a lightning bolt shot out. A mountain fell down and some wept. Most just died.

    We hated it, all of us. (All that was left of me.)

    It screamed and all the birds died.

    Looking up, I had an epiphany: I am the air that I breathe.

    I swatted at the gnats and locust rain. My eyes stung and died and my face became red.

    Thoughts rot away when you die.

    I'm not signing anything.

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      It's like living in fear, the terror that is a tangible part of life that you can feel as solidly as your skin. The way this is written makes me wonder if you are walking the old path again, but it is clearer and more concise than that in some ways, and more shrouded in others.
    I missed you writing. Thank you.
    | Posted on 2011-01-03 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]

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