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    dots Submission Name: Sabbat Conclave Liaison dots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1082/406/116
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsSabbat Conclave Liaison dots
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    Accidence ambience acoustics find
    Tractive tactile taciturn went
    Cantankerous cantilever capacity bind
    Wanton wayward warranty pent
    In extremis extremity exigence grind
    A priori aorist actuator glint
    Futurity fatidic's fornication wind
    Lecherous libido larcenies bent
    Lurid livid laconic mind
    Exergonic ephemeral extant spent




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      i actually got super tongue tied reading this. and in knowing that this kind of makes me look stupid i really didnt know what some of those words meant. it doesnt take away from your piece which i think is actually pretty cool, in a way i could kind of figure out what they meant. anywho goodwrite.
    | Posted on 2010-12-20 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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