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    dots Submission Name: Shades of Night The Flowers Bitedots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsShades of Night The Flowers Bitedots
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    First it comes with deadly power
    redolent scent on nightshade's flower.
    A shadow in the mist, sweet nothingness.
    Dreams and things perversion brings

    breaks your will takes its fill and stings.
    It slips into the purest thought an otherness,
    a blinding burst, unquenchable thirst
    what's it bring? It brings the worst.

    Shades of red on blackened toast
    honey drips on thighs you sigh, I roast.
    Heady heights, languid nights, so tight,
    burn me spurn me just don't bite.

    First it comes with deadly power
    redolent scent on nightshades flower.
    A shadow in the mist I can't resist
    dreams and things perversion brings.

    While in these depths I sink, I sing.
    For in this mesmerizing slumber kissed
    by passions deadly venom lips that twist
    my will to fevered broken bits, my wits

    have quietly given me the slip and knots
    of silken whips entwine and grind. Rotten
    feelings feel so sweet, of them I am replete.
    Nightshade's flowers I devour complete.

    I am in their power, their power pleases me.
    Dark are the offerings, their illocutions all I see.
    No torment here, no curse, I burst, I fly, I'm high.
    Singe my wings with molten gold as in glory I

    unfold upon my wanton quest of misadventure.
    In this swirling chaos I now do venture,
    at last to be consumed, nothing to exhume.
    It started with a flower and ended much too soon.




    Submitted on 2010-12-18 01:04:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sexy :) Flowers remind me of OKeefe's botanical porn masterpieces... I know she truly laughed every time she sold one of those to someone who found themselves irresistibly drawn to them without knowing quite why...

    Or maybe my mind is simply gutter-soaked as it usually is on a drunkenly confined Friday/Saturday border smear.
    | Posted on 2010-12-18 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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