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    dots Submission Name: Headaches dots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHeadaches dots

    Merry mindless meanderings of dirty evil deeds,
    the back yards full, the basement reeks,
    and things look bleak as I gaze upon
    my rolled up rug seeping with bile and blood.

    I am out of lime to quench the stench
    and I think pulled a hamstring hacking up this bitch.
    I should have just dumped her in a ditch
    and said screw all the forensic pathology nitwits'
    but no I had to drag her home to play
    and for this look how I pay and pay.
    I am out of room the freezers packed;
    I have got corpses stacked in sacks.

    To top it off I have a date at two
    with someone new.
    I so need to do my hair
    and I have nothing clean to wear.

    I swear I need a new hobby to pass the time,
    perhaps collecting wine or stamps
    would not have me out in all this damp.
    Oh, there goes my back damn cramp.

    OK that does it
    I am just renting a backhoe
    and keeping toes.
    I should have lots of room for those.

    Submitted on 2010-12-18 23:23:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      :) Start living right, Dale, or one day an icicle will fall on your head and take you outta the game...
    Perfect pic... the blurred neck in the background gives the proper morgue affect. (I used to collect morgue pics, btw, if you ever want to compare... I don't think my ex burned them all, but I'll have to dig them up---pardon the pun, of course....)
    | Posted on 2010-12-19 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]

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