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    dots Submission Name: Ganduridots
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    Author: DAlin
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 82/137/75
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsGanduridots
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    Ganduri
    Mult prea multe ganduri
    Incoltite intr-un loc uitat.

    Stralucesc in mintea mea
    Stele care te ating mereu
    Vreau sa pierd ce n-am avut
    Sa ma pierd prin parul tau.

    Sunt emotii ratacite
    Intr-un lac ce pare trist
    Sunt emotii parasite
    Si uitate intr-un vis.

    Cum poti sufletul sa-l spulberi
    Intr-o clipa, intr-un gand
    Oare inca poti cu ochi inchisi
    Sa ma simti aproape.
    Sa privesti o floare
    Sa atingi un sentiment
    Poti sa faci tu asta oare !

    Unde pot atinge ploaia
    Fara sa te chem zambind,
    Amintiri ce pleaca, zboara
    Tu ramai cantand, privind.

    Ai ales un strop de ploaie
    Ai ales, te bucuri...stiu
    Ai lasat un fulg de nea
    Ce se stinge in pustiu.

    Primavara iti lipseste
    Ii lipsesti si tu acum,
    Ingeri, nori si caprioare
    Pe un singur...singur drum.
    Ai in mana ta momente
    Care iti soptesc sa fugi
    Sa te-ndepartezi de mine
    Sa ma chemi, sa ma alungi.
    S ma ti in brate strans
    Sa ma pierzi...sa ma gasesti
    Sa ma faci sa te doresc
    Sa ma faci sa te urasc,
    Sa mai vrei sa te iubesc
    Sa mai vrei sa nu gresesc.
    Sa opresti timpul in loc
    Sa-l opresti, sa-l ti ascuns,
    Sa ma faci sa fiu cu tine
    Doar noi doi, de nepatruns.
    Dar tu sti ca nu se poate
    Totul e un vis pierdut
    Iti raman doar sunetele
    Soptite dulce, in trecut.








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