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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    The Flower - The Phenoix


    Dawn-
    Beautiful- The color of pink bloom would rise to greet an imploring face.
    Tragic in a way-- beauty confronting beauty- each falling victim fate.
    A flower to grow; allure a covetous grasp unknowingly blind to the shadows that loom behind-
    In due time the winter will come and take what the frost doesn't claim- A warning; gesture so kind-
    Hurry- climb towards the light- The cold

    Divine the latter of the beautiful duo-
    Her eyes carried a burden









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