[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 685
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 609


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    The Flower - The Phenoix

    Beautiful- The color of pink bloom would rise to greet an imploring face.
    Tragic in a way-- beauty confronting beauty- each falling victim fate.
    A flower to grow; allure a covetous grasp unknowingly blind to the shadows that loom behind-
    In due time the winter will come and take what the frost doesn't claim- A warning; gesture so kind-
    Hurry- climb towards the light- The cold

    Divine the latter of the beautiful duo-
    Her eyes carried a burden

    Submitted on 2010-12-22 18:47:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Linger written by saartha
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    True Death written by layDsayD
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Every..... written by jackz
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    written by Daniel Barlow




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]