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    dots Submission Name: Merge.dots

    Author: xxiknownowxx
    ASL Info:    16/F/GA
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 128/41/40
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I watched it burn. Their match incinerated when their eyes
    Contacted. your fingers spreading our diseases
    they carry. The ashes unconcerned
    With where they lie. Listen in to their faceless suicide. Is that really
    Your questions sneaking the dirt all over the rotting floors?
    So the story goes. Your rocking horse will get you nowhere.
    I asked you if I would see the day that your feet walked in front of mine.
    You liar. Merge.

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