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    dots Submission Name: Heart-of-Nightdots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsHeart-of-Nightdots
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    If I have wandered this bleak city
    in the gloaming hour;
    that enchanted hour
    when every shadow begets new meaning,
    And there strolled lost in the melancholy glow
    of gathering dreams.

    I have still known in my heart
    that the sun so recently bathed
    in the blood of dying,
    the sun,
    which seems to have forsaken me
    to this dark

    will yet rise once more,
    quiet my fears
    and shower me with gold.

    Yet, A Heart-of-Night
    can find no solace
    knowing the day will soon appear.




    Submitted on 2010-12-25 01:28:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A solemn message to be reading on Christmas Day, and yet a fitting reminder that such a world still exists for far too many. Most thankful I am that as a veteran I have never been in a situation where I had to kill or even witness the killing of another human being.

    I am somewhat familiar, however, of the toll that such exposure takes from several associations with those who have. It scrapes the bottom of the soul and no, I can't even pretend to understand how hard. It falls strictly under BTDT and this puts the rest of us owing more thanks than we can even know.


    | Posted on 2010-12-25 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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