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    dots Submission Name: I'll Never Knowdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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       The man I'm with I think I love but then I have to wonder if I loved him why would I wonder ... why would I question his past


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    dotsI'll Never Knowdots
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    I am undecided
    Do I love you
    Or do I just like you

    My emotions are a roller coaster of sorts
    For moments in time you are my one and only
    Then comes the realization

    ....

    These kids here now,
    For this is the weekend you have them
    Are kids you had with another women
    Love you shared with another women

    ....

    It hits home when I see your second ex wifes name and yours on an old piece of mail...
    I wonder if I'll ever measure up to them

    ....

    Your high school sweetheart whom you married and had 2 amazing children with
    Or your second wife whom you feel for and married brought her own kids into your life...

    ....

    Or will all my baggage just be too much for you to love me wholeheartedly?
    Do I fall too short
    I am close but not close enough?




    Submitted on 2010-12-26 16:45:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I find this amazing yet, deeply saddening. It's tough when you feel like theres something to compare yourself with. Honestly if you allow it.. it will drive you absolutely insane. I've been there, and its never fun. My best advice is to let it go or try to talk to him about it. Personally I'd chose the second latter. Talking things out and getting the reassurance that your not competing might help a lot. If you ask me... theres a reason hes not with her and why he is with you. Remember that. So obviously you have something that she doesn't. Plus he's bringing his children to meet you...you must mean something to him. Just my opinion. :)
    ~DD
    | Posted on 2010-12-26 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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