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"A New Year Is Dawning"

Author: Ron Cole
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"A New Year Is Dawning"

Time moves onward, and
having past,
we're left with memories
that forever

The warmth of Springtime,
the Summer's thrill,
the change of Autumn
and grey Winter's chill.

The hope in our hearts
springs eternally
the warmth of knowing
that you're here with me.

Fond memories of loved ones
whose time has now passed
bright hopes for the children
may their merriment last.

The old year is passing
and nearly is gone
a new year is dawning
a new era's begun!

Ron Cole
Year End 2010

Submitted on 2010-12-27 14:47:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Happy day Ron & Hip Hip HOORAY!

Always flawless in the flow and this piece is perfect for starting the day - a step in the new way with Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance,Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)
| Posted on 2011-06-01 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  Very good Ron, the words flowed well, the theme was bright,
our times move on, from morning 'til night.
| Posted on 2011-04-17 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
  The abstract of life is exclaimed in elegant words. With the changing seasons our life also changes. Hopes, memories and aspirations sustain our life. Good work Ron. Kudos to you for your excellent writing.
| Posted on 2011-04-04 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
  didn't it seem when we were younger that the days passed more slowly..??

now everything seems so fleeting...and looking toward the new year...we try to gather memories as quickly as we can...because time is moving like a runaway freight train.

| Posted on 2011-04-01 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
  your work always flows so amazingly, i really enjoyed this. and i hope you have an amazing new years!
| Posted on 2010-12-29 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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