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    dots Submission Name: "A New Year Is Dawning"dots

    Author: Ron Cole
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 2383/1715/240
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dots"A New Year Is Dawning"dots

    Time moves onward, and
    having past,
    we're left with memories
    that forever

    The warmth of Springtime,
    the Summer's thrill,
    the change of Autumn
    and grey Winter's chill.

    The hope in our hearts
    springs eternally
    the warmth of knowing
    that you're here with me.

    Fond memories of loved ones
    whose time has now passed
    bright hopes for the children
    may their merriment last.

    The old year is passing
    and nearly is gone
    a new year is dawning
    a new era's begun!

    Ron Cole
    Year End 2010

    Submitted on 2010-12-27 14:47:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Happy day Ron & Hip Hip HOORAY!

    Always flawless in the flow and this piece is perfect for starting the day - a step in the new way with Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance,Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)
    | Posted on 2011-06-01 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good Ron, the words flowed well, the theme was bright,
    our times move on, from morning 'til night.
    | Posted on 2011-04-17 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      The abstract of life is exclaimed in elegant words. With the changing seasons our life also changes. Hopes, memories and aspirations sustain our life. Good work Ron. Kudos to you for your excellent writing.
    | Posted on 2011-04-04 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      didn't it seem when we were younger that the days passed more slowly..??

    now everything seems so fleeting...and looking toward the new year...we try to gather memories as quickly as we can...because time is moving like a runaway freight train.

    | Posted on 2011-04-01 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      your work always flows so amazingly, i really enjoyed this. and i hope you have an amazing new years!
    | Posted on 2010-12-29 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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