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    dots Submission Name: sit on the side.dots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotssit on the side.dots
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    sometimes these things just aren't fair
    your throwing me scrapes
    as im fighting for air.

    you keep telling me
    that your girlfriend is something i can't be
    but then you pull me closer and kiss me
    and my lips slowly start to catch on fire.

    how do i keep my heart protected
    when you subconsciously keep reaching for it
    then very slowly you start to push me away.

    i wasn't looking for this!
    i didn't want something that would hurt in the end
    i started out just looking for a good time
    but like they always say
    someones bound to start falling in love.

    i guess this is ruining your fun
    and im trying not to contain your free spirit
    but i keep wishing that if im around enough
    you'll see just how amazing i can be.

    but till that day happens
    ill sit on the side
    and wish for you to be mine.




    Submitted on 2010-12-29 14:47:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I cant begin to describe how alike my situation is to this. The imagery and emotin in this hit hard, this is a new favorite. Thank you for sharing!
    | Posted on 2010-12-31 00:00:00 | by Di Re Rakord | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this is an good write, way to express emotions based on real life events
    | Posted on 2010-12-31 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]


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