A Most Welcome Demise by Mithrandir

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Author:	Mithrandir
ASL Info:	28/m/N.Y.
Elite Ratio:	4.62 - 452/681/113
Words:	156

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Description:
Its rubbish, thats all I seem to be able to right

A Most Welcome Demise dots

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It was the search
for warmth
behind those
tired, fragile eyes

It was
vanity
arrogance
ego

that led
to my welcome
demise

I thought
control was within
my grasp

but the blaze
hidden behind
amber irises
was all consuming

no trace remains
of the boy
I was

he let go
of all pretense
and believed

that she
was salvation
that she
was home

so desperate
to call her north
but that stars
already faded

now I sit gazing
for what
has long since passed

Never would I trade
the dream of her
for innocence lost

It was
love
hope
passion

that led
to my most
welcome demise

I searched
for warmth
behind those eyes
to find only ideals

the man
I long
to..

the man
I will
be

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