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Author:	littlepoet
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Treasures dots

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it's little life's treasures and courtesies
that go a long way

it's grascious little gesture's
and some kindly gesture.

that fill's the heart with a life time of gratitude
it heart warming

and refreashing to folks like you
there 's something we should never

forget and never take for granted
by indirection we have taken.

a big big part
in molding the thought's and mind's

and it is so people like you who
reach like poeple like me.

because no can win heart's and mind's alone
we must work together

why ?

we must work together so we can win the heart's of other's
in one community .

Submitted on 2011-01-01 02:45:13 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
you are a great writer where in the world did you get such a inspriation to write this beautiful poem.
not trying to pry. would like to know
thanks for sharing
| Posted on 2011-02-08 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]
This was good, a bit odd on the grammer, but good and upbeat which is something I rarely see on this site.
| Posted on 2011-01-04 00:00:00 | by TheInvisible | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.