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it's little life's treasures and courtesies
that go a long way
it's grascious little gesture's
and some kindly gesture.
that fill's the heart with a life time of gratitude
it heart warming
and refreashing to folks like you
there 's something we should never
forget and never take for granted
by indirection we have taken.
a big big part
in molding the thought's and mind's
and it is so people like you who
reach like poeple like me.
because no can win heart's and mind's alone
we must work together
we must work together so we can win the heart's of other's
in one community .
Submitted on 2011-01-01 02:45:13
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you are a great writer where in the world did you get such a inspriation to write this beautiful poem.
not trying to pry. would like to know
thanks for sharing
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This was good, a bit odd on the grammer, but good and upbeat which is something I rarely see on this site.
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