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    dots Submission Name: Treasures dots
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    Author: littlepoet
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    dots Treasures dots
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    it's little life's treasures and courtesies
    that go a long way

    it's grascious little gesture's
    and some kindly gesture.

    that fill's the heart with a life time of gratitude
    it heart warming

    and refreashing to folks like you
    there 's something we should never

    forget and never take for granted
    by indirection we have taken.

    a big big part
    in molding the thought's and mind's

    and it is so people like you who
    reach like poeple like me.

    because no can win heart's and mind's alone
    we must work together

    why ?

    we must work together so we can win the heart's of other's
    in one community .




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    ||| Comments |||
      you are a great writer where in the world did you get such a inspriation to write this beautiful poem.
    not trying to pry. would like to know
    thanks for sharing
    | Posted on 2011-02-08 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]
      This was good, a bit odd on the grammer, but good and upbeat which is something I rarely see on this site.
    | Posted on 2011-01-04 00:00:00 | by TheInvisible | [ Reply to This ]


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