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A def thing

Author: shatty
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Well im from a country in the caribbean and recently there was a surge in crime so i decided to write this poem

A def thing

They say the killings in the streets are senseless

They say the youths in the streets move relentless

Like wild beasts not like birds with a coop to nest

Coops that teach manners

Coops that teach respect

Coops where those in charge says another man’s life is just as important as yours

Coops where they show you how to use a pen and a book instead of giving us hooks

Hooks that we use to hang, defile, rape, rob and the list goes on

That’s what one black bird hands down to its chicks today

Virgin trigger finger cowards…cowards I say cause they hide,

hide behind the shadows of the night

hide behind a mask…shit..not looking out for the innocent passers-by as they

pass by not knowing their fate..thier untimely paralysis by the hands of a black guy who is high on drugs

drugs called stupidity, lawlessness, ignorance wtf I’d rather be high on weed

black seeds that spread chaos they say.

Or should I say we say, she say or he say but when its all boiled we all said it.

One random act causes another and another and another until a pattern develops that’s the chaos theory

Let your first act be that of peace and wisdom let the pattern develop.


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