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    dots Submission Name: Nashville Westdots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1084/406/116
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Prose/Depressed
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    dotsNashville Westdots
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    Yearning and turning towards things that we've learned . Burning with fires for the things we've discerned . Across the desert to the castle made of sand . Where all the people would play games with our land . I do not see how we are going to stand without a fight .




    Submitted on 2011-01-02 02:08:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      See I like Nashville a lot.
    | Posted on 2015-05-04 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      
    I am so depressed- don't you see
    my friends done turned- their backs on me
    I walked down- to the country store
    but they wont carry- my note no more

    I am so depressed- don't you see
    my old dog is gone- but he left his fleas
    I need my whiskey - O I needs my smoke
    but dang it all- I'm so dad-gum broke




    | Posted on 2011-01-02 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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