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Nashville West


Author: monad
ASL Info:    64/M/California
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Words: 58
Class/Type: Prose /Depressed
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Nashville West



Yearning and turning towards things that we've learned . Burning with fires for the things we've discerned . Across the desert to the castle made of sand . Where all the people would play games with our land . I do not see how we are going to stand without a fight .




Submitted on 2011-01-02 02:08:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  See I like Nashville a lot.
| Posted on 2015-05-04 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
  
I am so depressed- don't you see
my friends done turned- their backs on me
I walked down- to the country store
but they wont carry- my note no more

I am so depressed- don't you see
my old dog is gone- but he left his fleas
I need my whiskey - O I needs my smoke
but dang it all- I'm so dad-gum broke




| Posted on 2011-01-02 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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