Nashville West

Author: monad ASL Info:    64/M/California Elite Ratio:    8 - 1092 /410 /117 Words: 58

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Nashville West

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Yearning and turning towards things that we've learned . Burning with fires for the things we've discerned . Across the desert to the castle made of sand . Where all the people would play games with our land . I do not see how we are going to stand without a fight .

Submitted on 2011-01-02 02:08:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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See I like Nashville a lot.

| Posted on 2015-05-04 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]

I am so depressed- don't you see my friends done turned- their backs on me I walked down- to the country store but they wont carry- my note no more I am so depressed- don't you see my old dog is gone- but he left his fleas I need my whiskey - O I needs my smoke but dang it all- I'm so dad-gum broke

| Posted on 2011-01-02 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

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