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    dots Submission Name: Dendrophiladots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsDendrophiladots
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    The swamp is deadly dank and dim
    only the desperate dare venture in.
    There are many paths into the mire,
    which path pray tell might you desire?

    Do you have an itch you wish to scratch,
    the swamp has a disease to match.
    If you think time is on your side
    forget it, you burn from the inside.

    You need to close your eyes and leap
    into wickedness dark and deep.
    Travel far to where the swamps seedy bars
    have devoured all those pretty stars.

    Is dendrophilia your game?
    The swamp has a tree calling your name.





    Submitted on 2011-01-02 19:29:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ah yes exogamous homology thats what this planet needs .
    | Posted on 2011-01-03 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      Fvck the trees. :)
    (PS: Do you...?) lol

    | Posted on 2011-01-02 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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