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    dots Submission Name: Looking Into Someones Eyes :)dots
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    Author: Cbarker
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    dotsLooking Into Someones Eyes :)dots
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    When looking into someones eyes,
    You see water from the feelings that they have,
    You see color for their personality,
    And the black for the dark feelings
    When looking into someones eyes you see,
    There future and past,
    The bad and good times
    But what you don't see is that
    You see a person trying to fit in and act out,
    And that's what I see everyday.




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