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    dots Submission Name: Decemberdots
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    Author: mugsy
    ASL Info:    68/M/Sooke/ B.C./Can.
    Elite Ratio:    4.1 - 138/106/35
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       "Just some thoughts that popped into my head as I watched a snow fall one December many years sgo.


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    dotsDecemberdots
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    When snow falls
    And all is quiet
    Within the woods
    You can hear it.
    Silence has it's own sound
    Like a sea shell held not
    too tightly to the ear,
    Much like that of time---
    as it passes,
    Through our lives,
    A lonely sound of
    whispers....




    Submitted on 2011-01-03 12:12:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      now i wish snow falls in Nigeria, so i havent heard tht,but i have held a shell close to my ear. but for the life of me its too long ago ,i cant remember what i heard.
    but i will check other of your work
    | Posted on 2011-01-05 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      i read this yesterday and meant to come back...

    i have a thing for snow it seems (and it's non-sounds). it is a quiet thing to listen to and watch fall.

    i like how you allude to time and it's lonely whispers. yes. i think snow can feel like that. it's as if all the world stops or slows and becomes a hush of sorts.

    this is pretty and melancholly; quiet like the snow.

    anyhoos...
    | Posted on 2011-01-04 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      I haven't heard the silence of a winter forest in many years but you take me to the memory. It does seem too, that time has its own kind of silence when you think about it. Haven't seen you in a long time. Life must be good in Canada.
    | Posted on 2011-01-04 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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